The Irony of It All


at work

kinda cold

not like your cold

been golfing a bunch

vacation coming up

prolly not gonna do much

nan isnt getting around any better

hows things w you


at home

noticed u have been abnormally quiet

cept fer yer creative writing

which needs no commending

crazy warm for November

u shood b making money w that

hey you’re getting in the middle of my poem



but not like your warm


been writing a bunch

poetry becomes u


weekend coming up

going camping, hiking, running, riding

you are?

all in one trip

jim’s got some time after months of working every day

and that’s how things are with me


well they sound very good

happiness becomes u as well

Maybe I’ll combine all of our mixed up lines and see how the poem turns out

do that

but dont blame me when it sux

It’s poetry, it can’t suck.

I will type up the poem after you go away, so that you don’t ruin it with your interjections.

Although your interjections made it what it will be.

How ironic is that??




Guess I kicked you out.

you are irony in prose

yes u did

i hate standing in the way of


then move it

move along now

2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Billybucb
    Nov 15, 2013 @ 08:24:16

    So very clever! This was very enjoyable my friend.


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